(1) "Notes" messed up/misprinted using photocopies, ink, tape, and tearing.
(2) All MrsEaves body text replaced with Ehmcke HTF--in class, the former was described to me as being over-used and best suited now for "Martha Stuart Living."
(3) "...Hypnogogic Images" changed to Gravur Condensed Light
(4) "Adults" spread was totally reworked: less decay and mess, more playful; text box added; arrows added; type added to the illustration, etc.
(5) Left page of "Jet spread" reworked: created a "Lubalin puzzle" to match the right side; made the left side less heavy.
(6) Three columns under the "R" page; right side, "See Saw," reworked
(7) New Typography for "Get up you old cow"
(8) "Ex-posed" spread eliminated
G. is still having trouble commenting on the blog. Here is what she emailed to me instead:
ReplyDelete"nick,
like all your changes.
great job.
have a few tweaks:
make "adults" smaller
kern "which embarrassed me"
make "the see saw" lower case
really good.
move onto the book covers."